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St RAPHAEL CHARITY FOUNDATION EMAILS

Suggestions fo writing emails!!!:

HI Leon,

Thanks for sharing your email draft. It sounds like you have a really ambitious and important mission with the St. Raphael Charity Foundation. I can definitely help you refine this email to make it more impactful and effective in reaching people and encouraging them to join your cause.

Here’s a breakdown of suggestions focusing on clarity, tone, and call to action:

Overall Tone and Focus:

Soften the Initial Demands: Starting with multiple emphatic demands (“KNOW someone…”) can feel a bit overwhelming. Consider opening with a more compassionate and inclusive tone that introduces the foundation’s mission first.

Emphasize “We” and the Foundation: While your personal story is important, the focus should quickly shift to the foundation and its collective effort.

Refine the Sense of Urgency: While the need is urgent, the current phrasing with multiple exclamation points can come across as less professional. Let the importance of the mission speak for itself.

Proofread Carefully: There are a few capitalization and spelling inconsistencies (“Every One,” “EMail,” “Trama”) that should be corrected for a professional appearance.

Specific Suggestions for Each Section:

Opening:

Instead of: “Hi every One! This is a very Important EMail:”

Consider: “Dear Friends,” or “A Message of Hope and Healing,” followed by a clear statement of the foundation’s purpose.

Identifying the Need:

Instead of the repetitive “KNOW someone that is afflicted with…”, consider a more concise and impactful way to highlight the prevalence of these conditions.

Consider: “Many lives are touched by conditions like cancer, diabetes, nerve neuropathy, nerve myopathy, and nerve trauma.”

Introducing Yourself and the Mission:

It’s good you mention your website for your background. However, in the email itself, you could briefly and warmly introduce the St. Raphael Charity Foundation and its core mission before mentioning your personal connection.

Instead of: “This is Leon Russell! I need your help! If you don’t know me, the website has my background and story! We, GOD, JESUS AND ME!, have STARTED A WEBSITE AND FOUNDATION to build several Hospitals(8) to treat Cancer with the new Protocols, and Treatments ready now! Other diseases such as Diabetes, Nerve Myopathy and Nerve Neuropathy, Nerve Trauma have new Treatments and Cures also! Researchers and Scientists from all over the world have created Cures and Therapies that need to be delivered to our Patients! We treat all Human Dieases! This hospital is designed to, treat all patients!”

Consider: “My name is Leon Russell, and I’m reaching out to you today with an urgent and hopeful message. Inspired by a deep commitment to healing, we have established the St. Raphael Charity Foundation with a clear vision: to build a network of hospitals dedicated to providing cutting-edge treatments for cancer, diabetes, nerve myopathy, nerve neuropathy, and nerve trauma. We believe that breakthroughs in medical research from around the world should be accessible to those who need them most.”

Focusing on Nerve Trauma:

Instead of: “We will be researching Treatments for Nerve Trauma!!!! Nerve Trauma hasn’t been vanquished yet! Those that are paralyzed with back trauma! Broken bone Trauma, and fractured hip Traumas still suffer!!!! Our Scientists will be Researching, Compiling, and Designing Cures and Treatments for Nerve Trama! There is now more than 10 years a of research done by Neurologists in the US. Britian, and Europe! WE HAVE TO FIX THIS!!!!!!!!!!”

Consider: “A significant focus of our research will be on nerve trauma. We recognize the profound challenges faced by individuals with paralysis from back trauma, broken bones, and hip fractures. Our dedicated scientists are committed to researching, compiling, and designing innovative cures and treatments, building upon over a decade of neurological research in the US, Britain, and Europe. We are determined to make a difference in this critical area.”

Call to Action (Website Information):

Keep the website link prominent and clear.

Consider: “Learn more about the St. Raphael Charity Foundation and our mission at [Your Website Link].”

The Email List Request:

This is a crucial part, but the current phrasing could be softened and clarified.

Instead of: “WHAT I NEED HELP WITH IS COMPILING AN EMAIL LIST FROM YOU TO START REQUESTING DONATIONS AND KEEP GENERATING MORE EMAILS! An EMail Chain LIST! Commercial EMail list providers want $1250 to start, so I have to appeal to you to help me get started! After you complete and submit YOUR membership form, please click on the email list page!!! WE NEED YOR EMAIL LIST!!!”

Consider: “To help us reach more people who can benefit from our work and support our mission, we are building an email list of interested individuals. If you believe in our cause and would like to stay informed about our progress and opportunities to contribute, we would be incredibly grateful if you would consider sharing your email address through the membership form on our website. Your support in this early stage is invaluable, as it will allow us to connect with a wider audience without incurring significant initial costs.”

Donation Request:

Clearly state the need for donations and guide people to the website.

Instead of: “WE ALSO NEED YOUR DONATIONS TO GET THIS DONE! ALL GUIDED ON THE WEB SITE!!!! The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org!”

Consider: “Your generous donations will be instrumental in bringing our vision to life and providing crucial care to patients. You can find more information on how to contribute on our website: [Your Website Link].”

Closing:

Maintain a professional and appreciative closing.

Instead of: “LEON RUSSELL”

Consider: “Sincerely,” or “With heartfelt gratitude,” followed by “Leon Russell” and “St. Raphael Charity Foundation.”

Email Addresses:

Keep the email addresses at the end for easy contact.

By making these changes, the email can be more easily understood, create a stronger connection with the reader, and clearly guide them on how they can help. What do you think of these suggestions? Would you like me to elaborate on any specific part?

SRCF EMAIL REQUEST OO1:

Hi every One!
This is a very Important EMail:

KNOW someone that is afflicted with CANCER!
KNOW someone that is afflicted with Diabetes!
KNOW someone that is afflicted with Nerve Neuropathy
KNOW someone that is afflicted with Nerve Myopathy
KNOW someone that is afflicted with Nerve Trauma

This is Leon Russell! I need your help! If you don’t know me, the website has my background and story!

We, GOD, JESUS AND ME!, have STARTED A WEBSITE AND FOUNDATION to build several Hospitals(8) to treat Cancer with the new Protocols, and Treatments ready now! Other diseases such as Diabetes, Nerve Myopathy and Nerve Neuropathy, Nerve Trauma have new Treatments and Cures also! Researchers and Scientists from all over the world have created Cures and Therapies that need to be delivered to our Patients! We treat all Human Dieases!

This hospital is designed to, treat all patients!

We will be researching Treatments for Nerve Trauma!!!! Nerve Trauma hasn’t been vanquished yet! Those that are paralyzed with back trauma! Broken bone Trauma, and fractured hip Traumas still suffer!!!! Our Scientists will be Researching, Compiling, and Designing Cures and Treatments for Nerve Trama! There is now more than 10 years a of research done by Neurologists in the US. Britian, and Europe! WE HAVE TO FIX THIS!!!!!!!!!!

Here is the web site for The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org! Learn MORE about St. RAPHAEL CHARITY FOUNDATION HERE!!!

EMAIL REQUEST!:
WHAT I NEED HELP WITH IS COMPILING AN EMAIL LIST FROM YOU TO START REQUESTING DONATIONS AND KEEP GENERATING MORE EMAILS! An EMail Chain LIST! Commercial EMail list providers want $1250 to start, so I have to appeal to you to help me get started! After you complete and submit YOUR membership form, please click on the email list page!!!

WE NEED YOR EMAIL LIST!!! WE ALSO NEED YOUR DONATIONS TO GET THIS DONE! ALL GUIDED ON THE WEB SITE!!!!
The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org!

LEON RUSSELL

EMAIL: LEONCRUSS@GMAIL.COM
EMAIL: STRAPHAELCHARITYFOUNDATION@GMAIL.COM

SRCF EMAIL REQUEST OO2:

Hi every One!
This is a very Important EMail:

This is Leon Russell! I need your help! If you don’t know me, the website has my background and story!

We, GOD, JESUS AND ME!, have STARTED A WEBSITE AND FOUNDATION to build several Hospitals(8) to treat Cancers Diabetes, Nerve Myopathy, Nerve Neuropathy, and Nerve Trauma!!!! Scientists from all over the world have created Cures and Therapies that need to be delivered to OUR Patients With the new Protocols, and Treatments ready now.! We treat all human Diseases!!

We will be researching Treatments for Nerve Trama!  Those that are paralyzed with back trama! Broken bone Trama, and fractured hip Tramas! Our scientists will be compiling and designing Cures and Treatments for Nerve Trama!

THESE Hospitals are designed to, and will treat all these patients!

Here is the web site for The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org! Learn about St. RAPHAEL CHARITY FOUNDATION HERE!!!

WE ALSO NEED YOUR DONATIONS TO GET THIS DONE! ALL GUIDED ON THE WEB SITE!!!! StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org!

LEON RUSSELL

EMAIL: LEONCRUSS@GMAIL.COM
EMAIL: STRAPHAELCHARITYFOUNDATION@GMAIL.COM

SRCF EMAIL REQUEST OO3:

Here’s a revised version of your email, incorporating your original text with my suggestions for improvement:

Subject:
AN Urgent Message of Hope and Healing!

Dear Friends,

Many lives are touched by conditions like cancer, diabetes, nerve neuropathy, nerve myopathy, and nerve trauma.

My name is Leon Russell, and I’m reaching out to you today with an urgent and hopeful message. We have established the St. Raphael Charity Foundation with a clear vision: to build several hospitals (8) dedicated to providing cutting-edge treatments for these conditions.

Researchers and scientists from around the world have created cures and therapies that need to be delivered to our patients. In addition to cancer, we will address other diseases, such as diabetes, nerve myopathy, and nerve neuropathy, with new treatments and cures. We treat all human diseases, and our hospitals are designed to treat all patients.

A significant focus of our research will be on nerve trauma. We recognize the profound challenges faced by individuals with paralysis from back trauma, broken bone trauma, and fractured hip traumas. Our dedicated scientists are committed to researching, compiling, and designing cures and treatments for nerve trauma. There is now more than 10 years of research done by neurologists in the US, Britain, and Europe. We have to fix this!

Learn more about the St. Raphael Charity Foundation and our mission at
The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org.

To help us reach more people who can benefit from our work and support our mission, we are building an email list of interested individuals. If you believe in our cause and would like to stay informed about our progress and opportunities to contribute, we would be incredibly grateful if you would consider completing and submitting your membership form on our website and then clicking on the email list page. Commercial email list providers want $1250 to start with 500 emails, so your help in getting our chain email started is invaluable!

We need your email list and your donations to make this happen. All the guidance you need is available on our website:
The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org.

Thank you for considering our request and for your support.

Sincerely,

Leon Russell

St. Raphael Charity Foundation

Email: LEONCRUSS@GMAIL.COM

Email: STRAPHAELCHARITYFOUNDATION@GMAIL.COM

Revised Draft FOR Personalized email:

SRCF EMAIL REQUEST OO4:

Subject:
Dear MS. Frances Castañeda Dyess
President
Houston East End Chamber of Commerce,

Many lives are touched by conditions like cancer, diabetes, nerve neuropathy, nerve myopathy, and nerve trauma.

My name is Leon Russell, and I’m reaching out to you today with an urgent and hopeful message. Inspired by a deep commitment to healing, we have established the St. Raphael Charity Foundation with a clear vision: To build a network of hospitals(8) dedicated to providing cutting-edge treatments for the above conditions. We believe that breakthroughs in medical research from around the world HAPPENING RECENTLY, should be accessible to those who need them most!!! St. Raphael Hospitals is truly needed to deliver these treatments in the USA!!!!!!!!!!!

This project did not happen by accident!!! I have been a Computerist all my Professional life! 9 months ago GOD AND JESUS, AND THE HOLY SPIRIT, came to me just before waking to give me this assignment!!!!! The HOLY SPIRIT has visited me every day since then! His guidance has been spectacular, See our website!!!

With the significant influx of people and Fortune 1000 to your area, we believe your area needs our hospitals!!

Learn more about the St. Raphael Charity Foundation and my personal story at The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org.

A significant focus of St Raphael’s research will be on nerve trauma. We recognize the profound challenges faced by individuals with paralysis from back trauma, broken bones, and hip fractures. Our dedicated scientists are committed to researching, compiling, and designing innovative cures and treatments, building upon over a decade of neurological research in the US, Britain, and Europe. We are determined to make a difference in this critical area.

To help us reach more people who can benefit from our work and support our mission, we are building an email list of interested individuals. If you believe in our cause, we would be incredibly grateful if you would consider sharing your chamber email address list!. Your support in this early stage is invaluable, as it will allow us to connect with a wider audience without incurring significant initial costs.

Your residents’ and businesses’ generous donations will be instrumental in bringing our vision to life and providing crucial care to patients. We have a Facility Naming Tree where Donors may choose their memorial!!! You can find more information about us and how to contribute on our website: The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org.

The impact on your area!!!
The Hospital, The University, and The Library is estimated to create 5,000 Jobs, ALL with great salaries!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Economic impact will be over $2,000,000,000 for all 3 complexes annually, and 1,500,000,000 in construction!

Thank you for considering our request and for your support.

Sincerely,

Leon Russell
CEO
440-812-1637
I WOULD LOVE A CONVERSATION ABOUT THIS PROJECT!!!!

The St. Raphael Charity Foundation

Email: LEONCRUSS@GMAIL.COM
Email: STRAPHAELCHARITYFOUNDATION@GMAIL.COM

Revised Draft FOR Personalized Celebrity email:

SRCF EMAIL REQUEST OO5:

Subject:
A Message of Hope and Healing from The St. Raphael Charity Foundation!

Dear Kevin O’Leary,
Entreprenure!!!!!

Many lives are touched by conditions like cancer, diabetes, nerve neuropathy, nerve myopathy, and nerve trauma.

My name is Leon Russell, and I’m reaching out to you today with an urgent and hopeful message. Inspired by a deep commitment to healing, we have established the St. Raphael Charity Foundation with a clear vision: to build a network of hospitals dedicated to providing cutting-edge treatments for the above conditions. We believe that breakthroughs in medical research from around the world should be accessible to those who need them most.

This project did not happen by accident!!! I have been a Computerist all my Professional life! 9 months ago GOD AND JESUS came to me just before waking to give me this assignment!!!!! The HOLY SPIRIT has visited me every day since then! His guidance has been spectacular, See our website!!!

Learn more about the St. Raphael Charity Foundation and my personal story at The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org.

We need you to help us reach more people who can benefit from our work and support our mission!! We are building an email list of interested individuals. If you believe in our cause and would like to stay informed about our progress we would be incredibly grateful if you would consider sharing your email address by return eMail. Your support in this early stage is invaluable, as it will allow us to connect with a wider audience without incurring significant initial costs. If you have a subscriber list, and can share it, that would be incredible!

Your generous donations will be instrumental in bringing GODS PROJECT to life on earth and providing crucial care to patients. We have a Naming List that donors can select a memorial!!! You can find more information on how to contribute on our website: The StRaphaelCharityFoundation.org.

I know this is different than a normal inquiry, but we know you can help make this happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for considering our request and for your support!!!!!

Sincerely,

Leon Russell

St. Raphael Charity Foundation

Email: LEONCRUSS@GMAIL.COM
Email: STRAPHAELCHARITYFOUNDATION@GMAIL.COM